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1) My will is fucking weak,

Why do people always do the wrong shit, and then they tweet,
I am a loner, with a broken heart, by this life my soul aint hard,
They call me names, think Im famous,
Bitch you have nothing to tame us.

My life is just going to down an crumbling,
Sis it aint anymore humble,
Every word to the people I love, I always stumble,
Im in trouble like in a bubble

My life is just going to down an crumbling,
Sis it aint anymore humble,
Every word to the people I love, I always stumble,
Im in trouble like in a bubble

Anxiety hits us harder then a bullet would,
People say, "Think of suicide? think you should"
Remember all the friends in yo hood,
They wont be by yo side when the god has stood,
Cigarettes calm you down, thats a problem found,
You sleep with your eyes wide open,
You pick up the revolver, bed is red, now you wait to be in the ground and lowered.

Tears coming down your face,
Sharpened blades on your veins,
Your body locked on the society chains,
Suicide been happenin on the bloody trains.
All of my t-shirts, have red blood stains..

 

2) Say goodbye tonight,

He will never fight,
Thats his story, right?

When you talk shit the karma gonna reach,
Imagine if you bully, and he will drink some bleach,
His soul and mind - you will never reach,
He fighting for his live, his pain inside,
You sad, you mad, why u never pick a side?
Mommy, I am sorry, I fed you lies,
At age 7 I picked up the flies,
Being 9 year old I looked at the skies,
When I turned 11 I said "I wanna go to heaven"
Then the 13 kicked me, why you always hit me?
Are you my mommy, or a killer in this story?


His pain inside,
He never tried,
He loves a lot,
He never thinks hes hot,

His pain inside,
He never tried,
He loves a lot,
He never thinks hes hot,

Broken heart, damaged soul,
He acts just only as a mole,
The handgun he stole,
Just to kill himself even more.

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Redaguota Gruodžio 15, 2019, nario lyRics